You drilled a hole in my heart
that still loves you back for no reason at all.
'coz no matter how many pieces my heart is into right now
there's still a part that vouches for you somehow.
'coz no matter how much pain you filled in
the fact that I loved and I always will - would remain
'coz no matter how pointless it may seem , no doubt
even after all the ire and hate tires itself out.
You leave me at such crossroads
goodbyes will not suffice.
I shall only walk away this time
bidding a farewell that wouldn't rhyme.
** A couple of rhyming lines do not make a poem. This ain't a poem.
A major query most of them had was if I had a breakup ?
Well..my query is why do you need a breakup to write 'a couple of dark rhyming lines' ?
Such questions spoil the essence.
This 'piece' is more like 'an elated feeling triggered by a sad stimulus' as put by a friend. :P
In simple words , I wrote coz I felt like writing it.
No background story.Not necessarily :)
that still loves you back for no reason at all.
'coz no matter how many pieces my heart is into right now
there's still a part that vouches for you somehow.
'coz no matter how much pain you filled in
the fact that I loved and I always will - would remain
'coz no matter how pointless it may seem , no doubt
even after all the ire and hate tires itself out.
You leave me at such crossroads
goodbyes will not suffice.
I shall only walk away this time
bidding a farewell that wouldn't rhyme.
** A couple of rhyming lines do not make a poem. This ain't a poem.
A major query most of them had was if I had a breakup ?
Well..my query is why do you need a breakup to write 'a couple of dark rhyming lines' ?
Such questions spoil the essence.
This 'piece' is more like 'an elated feeling triggered by a sad stimulus' as put by a friend. :P
In simple words , I wrote coz I felt like writing it.
No background story.Not necessarily :)
yeah..absolutely...no background story needed every time.. Its like asking is music needed for hearts to dance? :P
ReplyDeleteRhyming doesn't makes poems...and poems don't always rhyme.. :)
This is a poem. :)
:)
DeleteSo ab ye bhi bata do..how is the 'poem'? :D
I am lolling :D the rhyming lines are soulful though :)
ReplyDeletelol I want to know why you are lolling :D
DeleteHow nice to come back and see not a lot has changed on a few blogs and how regular a lot of people still are :)
ReplyDeletenice small piece of scribbling there !
And you toh totally disappeared !
Deletenice to see you here :)